The Best Day Of My Life
The best day of my life is when i went to Sky city.
Sky city has yucky and yummy food because there is some food that tastes yuck to me and some food that taste yum to me. I ate prawns and ice-cream with sprinkles and lollies and a hot chocolate with marshmallows but i only ate the marshmallows then i gave it to Kingston.
I went there for my papa Keith’s birthday. We had heaps of cake and heaps of lollies and heaps of drinks and heaps of ice-cream at Sky city. We played tag and hide and seek with my brother we told jokes and had the best day of our lives. When we were going home we saw police men
arresting a man with a flash as car!
When we got home we went to bed. I had so much fun.
Kia ora my name is Princess from Red Hill school.
ReplyDeleteIn your first sentence there is a lowercase I, maybe you could change it to a capital I.Thank you have a Merry Christmas and a happy new year.